Image composition

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One of the first video test, recorded with my phone.

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The writing on the video is a translation of the words writtened in italian next to it.

This is a test that follow one of the feedbacks during a group-critique session, but I feel is creating less sense of ambiguity, making it too easy for the viewer to just watch the video without involvement.

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Testing a different colour of background. Not doing anything to the work. No point.

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In this version the objects on the bed are more personal, and could help in building a picture of myself.

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Addedd a list of things that I don’t have to replace the translation of the Italian sentences. This will help to create more uncertainty within the portrait, creating more space for dialog between the piece and the viewer.

The Face need to be more hidden behind the phone, so the viewer will not clearly understand if the voice from the sound file is coming from the person in the video.

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The latest version combine a sound file in Italian, the video and the sentences next to it.

I feel the combination of the three elements, together with the involvement of the viewer, will create a conversational space that could be poetical.